Day 102-IBMC#4-Haiku

It is time for part four in the Incredible Blogger’s Marathon Challenge and I am supposed to interpret a Haiku. Ugh! Well, I will try, even though poetry is not my strong suit.


I am to choose one of the 5  given Haikus and either build a story around it, continue it with your own or interpret it in your own words.

I chose number four: love lasts for a while-when the while is forever-forever looks a while

My interpretation is that marriage is supposed to be forever, loving each other as long as you are together, which seems like forever, because it is in the life of the relationship. Does it feel like forever, no, because you are in love.




About Kim Smyth

I love writing about my passions, my paleo journey and essential oils and what they do for me. I want to help others by giving them useful news they can use and teach them about this lifestyle I've grown to love. I'm married and we have three grown children who are off living their​ own lives. We also have two pets, our Shorkies who are like our babies. Find me at Kimmy's Patio or drop me a line at or
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4 Responses to Day 102-IBMC#4-Haiku

  1. Suze says:

    I think you nailed it.

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  2. Ladybuggz says:

    sounds good to me! , I don’t like Haiku either! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Love it is! You did well. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

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